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Cry For You by ~Soul-Of-Fire:iconSoul-Of-Fire:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Lyrical




Falling through the gaps of time.
Question what to live for.
Caught in my world of pretend.
Discovering what to die for.
Running desperately through soothing nightmares.
Asking what to lie for.
Breaking down all I ever had.
Wondering what to cry for.

[Chorus:]
Help me find a cure,
For my tragedy.
All this damn craving,
For a remedy.
Give me wings so I can fly,
And get far away from here.
All things I see are tainted,
Because it's me they're near.

Winding through the poison maze.
Gave up on what to live for.
Caught up in humanity's web.
Found out what to die for.
Analyze my surrounding world.
Can't see what to lie for.
Unable to rebuild myself.
Understand what to cry for.

Help me find a cure,
For my tragedy.
All this damn searching,
For a remedy.
Give me wings so I can fly,
And get far away from here.
All things I see are tainted,
Because it's me they're near.

Can't do this...
Won't do this...
Don't see...
What I missed...
Take back...
All I did...
Just for you...
Just for this...

Just for you.
Live for you.
Die for you.
Lie for you.
Cry for you.
Just for you.

October 31, 2003
©2003-2009 ~Soul-Of-Fire
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Submitted: November 19, 2003
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Kinda down one day and felt completely exiled from everything around me...most of the stuff I write is when I'm down, anyways, so...=P But yeah, it's basically about me being completely lost within my own mind, then later kinda trying to prove something to someone...I dunno, just read it. =P
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~relentlessrain:iconrelentlessrain: Dec 23, 2003, 7:23:32 PM
I like this alot. I kinda almost see a similarity in my writing style.. it might just be that we both use proper grammar, but maybe something else. Awesome. :+fav:
~Soul-Of-Fire:iconSoul-Of-Fire: Dec 23, 2003, 8:28:11 PM
Awesome stuff. :) Thanks a lot for commenting on this, by the way. I never like much of what I write, but I liked this one, and I was disappointed when no one commented on it. So YEAY! :P I'm strange, but that's ok.
~ForeverLonelyFreak:iconForeverLonelyFreak: Jan 11, 2004, 2:32:06 PM
WOW!! this is incredibly good..love it! u have some major talent
~Soul-Of-Fire:iconSoul-Of-Fire: Jan 12, 2004, 7:06:00 PM
*dances* YEAY! I was all disappointed and stuff when I first put this one on here, 'cause it's probably one of things I like the best out of all I've written (I don't like much of my stuff), aside from Foreign Romance, Synthetic, For You, and a few others...and anyway...nobody left anything on it and such. But...YEAY! Thank you bunches! :D
~ForeverLonelyFreak:iconForeverLonelyFreak: Jan 12, 2004, 7:08:56 PM
lol i know the feeling of not likeing what you submit i feel the same..np
~blushingsilly07:iconblushingsilly07: Apr 7, 2004, 8:35:47 AM
:worship: this was amazing and i'd pay so much to hear this... your words are beautiful and so full of emotion!
~Slaymaker:iconSlaymaker: Apr 7, 2004, 3:13:50 PM
Good, good, excellent!

It reminds me of a RPG I'm on because of the 'cure my tragedy' part -.-
~Ryonu-The-White:iconRyonu-The-White: Apr 11, 2004, 12:03:42 PM
This is brilliant! ^^ You're songs/poems are inspiring me now.. *.*
~blak-dragon:iconblak-dragon: Jun 9, 2004, 10:56:54 PM
I liked this... I believe I even heard a faint tune to go with it within my mind. Thanks for +DevWatch... I'll add you too.

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