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Ripping apart the broken wounds,
Too impatient to let them bleed.
The decedance of the common man,
Not fake enough for you to believe.

[Chorus:]
Scars crying their final goodbye,
As they climb through the surface, awaiting to die.
Decieving their reason on the waking night,
Bleed through their essence for the final time.

Sworn to hate myself all the time,
By exile to the place of horrid silence.
Secrecy becoming my unwanted ally.
Don't know why I even tried this.

Scars crying their final goodbye,
As they climb through the surface, awaiting to die.
Decieving their reason on the waking night,
Bleed through their essence for the final time.

Chance after time,
And time after chance.
It all feel apart
By the savage glance.
And I'm sorry that
I so badly hate you.
But can't you see
I hate myself, too.

Scars crying their final goodbye,
As they climb through the surface, awaiting to die.
Decieving their reason on the waking night,
Bleed through their essence for the final time.

And I'm sorry that
I so badly hate you.
But can't you see
I hate myself, too.

July 10, 2004
©2004-2009 ~Soul-Of-Fire
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The title's Spanish for Savage.
Once again, up really late (it's currently 4:45 a.m.) just thinking about my past and just came up with these. It's a combination of a bunch of stuff, nothing really specific. Well...that's a lie. But oh well. You wanna know specifics, send a note or something and I'll tell you =P
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this really moved me, it reminds me (almost too much to bear) of times not so long agao and converstaions i di not want to be a part of.. i adore your writing

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I love your comments and your textures
I really like this new writing you've been doing. The lines are longer and more in-depth. Not so much centered on HAVING to rhyme. :)

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I don't see me anymore....

Never monkey with another monkey's monkey, unless that monkey's monkey is a monkey
And I'm sorry that
I so badly hate you.
But can't you see
I hate myself, too.

this stanza moved me more than i can say. this whole piece was so honest and passionate that i am going to have to make it a :+fav:
Very nice! This is the quality of work that most of my fans give me the best compliments for. You should be very proud of yourself. I really like this poem. :rose:

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^^It was you who broke my mason plate.^^
~~The eye of the Dragon sees beyond imagination.~~
-sniff- sad. Very nicely written as always, you should go and get all of these songs sung at a conscert or something! You're sooo damn good

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I ish a kyootiful bloodeh
I can almost hear this song, it's amazing. the way you describe emotions is wonderful, this is a definite fav! :D
holy crap awesome! i love your lyrics (ok, how many times have i said that? lol)

i absolutely looove the chorus.... wow....

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"Nothing can happen till you swing the bat."

"It takes an idiot to do cool things. That's why it's cool."
beautiful i love it. to bad i cant favourite it *shakes fist* its great work i am so proud *tears*

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You dress to impress
the make-up will hide who you are
you dress to impress
the lies will hide what you want to be
you dress to impress
so you will be just a shadow
"hate"...such a strong word.

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